This week in T2 we have been writing explanations with a success criteria and, this is also for our writing. We had to pick a topic and find information of it and write it in our own words into a doc, I picked hurricanes because they are interesting to learn or talk about and this is what I wrote. Enjoy
Hi Saamiya!,
ReplyDeleteThanks for this information it is quite Interesting. You might want to work on the formating.
From Niko
Kia ora Saamiya, It's Angelina from Totara 3. I really like this piece of writing you have a detailed explanation on how they work, I learnt a lot about how they work. I also liked how you had a good font and good grammar so it was easy to read. The only thing you could improve on is changing the format to it is easier to read.
ReplyDelete- See ya