Wednesday 11 March 2020

My Haiku


This is my Haiku. For this Haiku what I did we sort of like a acrostic poem but a little twist. On the first line we had to put a 5 line sentence for your theme, and the second line is a 7 word line and with the words you have to spread it out to make it a 7 word, and the last line you have to make a 5 word line and I spread ed my last line out. Hope you like it.

3 comments:

  1. Hi Saamiya

    How are you doing during this level 4 lockdown? I hope there are some fun things happening at your house!

    I really enjoyed reading your Haiku poems. The first one made me feel warm and want to go to the beach. The second one reminded me of what it is like outside at the moment. I have my fire going and my dog is sitting right in front of it!!

    Remember to go and check out the Totara site for your work and some fun things to do while you are at home! Maybe you could make playdough and try making the animals! That sounds like fun!

    I look forward to reading some of your work over the next few weeks!

    Talk again soon!

    Mrs Costello :)

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  2. Hi Saamiya

    I have been keeping an eye on your blog and would love to see a post about what you've been doing to keep busy during the lockdown.

    The hardest thing is trying to decide what to write so maybe you could pick one activity that you enjoyed and share it on your blog for me. Then I can give it a go and tell you how we went in my bubble!

    It may be a physical activty eg at my house we created an inside obstacle course using the couch and cushions and dining table!

    I look forward to hearing from you!
    Miss Panther

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  3. Hi Saamiya this is Arli from Grey Main school i really like your haiku on seasons that is a good idea i like how you described the sand as bland and rhymed it
    keep up the great work
    Arli

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.