The Abandoned Walk

The Abandoned Walk

One day on November 13 1876 on a Saturday a girl named Alissa woke up from her sleep. She was very excited because she knew tomorrow would be her birthday. She started off her day by going downstairs and having breakfast. It came to realisation she had 2 awful mean step sisters. The oldest girl was called Jullien and the other one was called Gretel. The step sisters were having breakfast but confused why Alissa was so happy. They asked “What’s wrong with you? Why are you so happy..?” Jullien said “Yea that is weird” said Gretel. Well don’t you guys know what day it is? Yea said Gretel. REALLY? Replied Alissa.“Yea November 13 and it’s a saturday”. Alissa had a bored face once she said that, nvm said Alissa i’ll just have breakfast..


(12:00am) Hey mum “What Do You Want”. oh I was asking if I could go on a walk. “Hmmm that means you’re sisters have to come with you”. Oh nvm can I go on a walk later then. “Sure if you want”. Mk thanks, “well at least do you know what is happening tomorrow?”. “Well of course it’s your birthday tomorrow right.” “ OM- Yes someone knows what is happening tomorrow”. Why do you say that Alissa said mum, well Jullien and Gretel didn’t know what was happening tomorrow and they were confused why I was happy..


Well you will have the best birthday tomorrow, okay mum. Alissa left the room and her stepmom was surprised that she was called mum by Alissa. Hey girls come down for dinner okay! Replied everyone, haha why did you say okay you don’t even eat with us on a normal daily basis. MUM tell Alissa she can’t eat with us.. Oh ya Jullien and Gretel, Alissa is eating with us please be nice tomorrow is special “Why does everyone say tomorrow is special OMG”. Let’s just EAT girls yells mum.


After dinner Alissa you can go on the walk if you want now okay mum at least Jullien and Gretel are asleep yeah please don’t go too far. I won’t bye. Bye. Replied mum.. Alissa started off her walk. Alissa started with a little skipping and saw 2 paths she was thinking that she had never seen the second path, but she forgot what path she takes every time she goes here. Without suspecting Alissa guesses what side to go Alissa walks for 10 minutes so far, it has come to realise that she had never been here. Alissa thought that she knew that she went the right way, Alissa thought that side got constructed but 20 minutes later in the walk she found a pound and she knew she went the wrong way.


Alissa got scared and was about to start walking back home until she heard a noise around her the leaves were shaking and there was no wind. Alissa screamed so loud and then it all went quiet.


(The Next Day) Mum checks everyone’s room. Jullien and Gretel come for breakfast and bring Alissa. Girls I told you to bring Alissa, she wasn’t in her room. Both said. I’ll go check myself. Alissa come to breakfast- Alissa, Alissa where are you. Jullien and Gretel goes to check on mom, mum is everything alright. Can you guys please call the police please. 10 minutes later the police arrive. What seems to be the problem? Said police. We have a missing girl. She went on a walk and never came back. Okay stay here well go and check. Police go on the walk, guys wait did she go through here it’s abandoned though. Oh gosh we have to report back to their mum and to the station that she’s gone. To Be Continued..